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3 Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

是的

節省時間，花在工作/家庭上

科技發展，食物不虞缺乏

人們互相依賴

各國的精華食物，享受各國的文化

婦女也可以有自已的貢獻

I believe that easy to prepare food now has really changed and improved people’s lives. People don’t have to prepare food from (the scrach = no ‘the’ needed and add a t to scratch) nowadays, it means more time saving(s). Parents can spend more time on their family and children, and housewives can save more energy on preparing food.

With (the technology = technological) improvement(s), most people don’t have to worry about lacking food any more. It means that people in the whole world depend (more) on each other than ever. It’s pretty easy to get all kinds of food from stores now(, = . )  (sometimes the food are so various from different cultures = There are so many foods from different cultures available, )that every choice is a fresh experience.

When we talk about cultures, we also (take = talk) about food. In big (city = cities), it’s easy to get different food from different cultures, and people can enjoy and know more cultures by (way of food -=exposure to that culture’s food.)

Most important of all, saving time on preparing food is always (a = ‘a’ is not needed) good news for women. In the past, it’s almost impossible for women to take care of their work and their family at the same time. Now it’s more and more easy for women to balance both. More time and energy are saved, (and this) means more women can have a quality lifestyle if they choose to.

 Besides, food is so easy to prepare nowadays, there is no more excuses for men not to help out in the kitchen.